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Quirky Me

A messy **** retentive shy extrovert dancing in the corner that's me a babbling bouquet of awe fits and rage and you'll have to compete with the birds for my attention and sorry without emotional impaction I have no retention can you tell me again your name? 18.02.04 Composed for Madison Demetros' "Quirks"

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/22/2019 9:08:00 AM

A random pick but I'm glad I did Maureen. This brought a smile to my face for real. I'm happy you met your husband because I was the guy across the room doing the same thing you were doing in this poem lol. We would have never met, but for thanks to these poetry pages. The last line is a wonderful kicker lol turdus migratorus who?

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/23/2019 1:19:00 PM

I had to read it through myself ;p

Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/22/2019 10:00:00 AM

I did try to fill in the bleep but couldn't. Thanks Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/22/2019 9:42:00 AM

Anal was censored, how anal! Delighted you like this one, kindred spirit. xomo!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/9/2018 8:07:00 AM

So cute! I wonder how many OTHER people you've described! Janice

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/9/2018 9:22:00 AM

More than I figured lol! ;) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/8/2018 7:01:00 PM

LOL - this is so me, (except the extrovert - I am opposite - I love people, but I re-energize alone) ... you probably figured that out, though, ha! (Is my OCD showing?) Lovely write - good luck! I haven't written for this one yet ... my time has been not my own of late. <3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/9/2018 9:22:00 AM

Oh I get testy if I don't get my alone time LOL! I'm a closet extrovert, think a mouse that excels at public speaking. Can't wait to read your quirky poem! smooches <3

Anna Hopper

Date: 2/7/2018 4:40:00 PM

Omg! That is me and you!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/8/2018 6:45:00 AM

Ha! I'll make more room in the corner, what do you want to hear? Yo DJ... <3

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/6/2018 11:56:00 AM

You paint a picture with words that brings this image alive in the reader’s mind, and we too can appreciate the charm of this character with a quirky nature and smile. Well done, Emile.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/6/2018 2:19:00 PM

Thank you for your warm support my friend. A lovely day to you! xomo

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/6/2018 2:10:00 AM

Thank you for a much needed chuckle! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Poetry-hugs ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/6/2018 9:25:00 AM

Thanks CayCay, delighted you enjoyed! Love "poetry-hugs"! Right back atcha! xomo :)

Bernard Chan

Date: 2/5/2018 2:27:00 AM

Every one of your poems is like a shooter with 10 new liqueurs doing cartwheels in them. Yum! :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/5/2018 10:27:00 AM

Cheers! If I ever get a book together YOU have to write in my sleeve ;) thank you dear poet! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2018 9:18:00 PM

That is so adorable, Maureen... or you're adorable. Either way, I love your poem.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/5/2018 10:24:00 AM

Aaah! You're awesome :) Thank you Line! xomo <3

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/4/2018 12:01:00 PM

This is a fun poem to read Maureen, we all have our quirks lol .

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/5/2018 10:20:00 AM

Delighted to entertain :)) we certainly do! Thank you Heidi xomo!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/4/2018 11:52:00 AM

Awesome in a word Mo! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/5/2018 10:19:00 AM

Thank you Che :) xomo!!

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2018 11:19:00 AM

Dory is a forget full fish, must have serious ADD..

Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 11:32:00 AM

Dory, not you.. lol

Jan Allison

Date: 2/4/2018 10:36:00 AM

keep on having the words dancing off your page Mo - I sure can relate to some of your lines:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/4/2018 10:42:00 AM

Thank you Jan! :)) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2018 10:17:00 AM

So you are a bit like Dory from Finding NEmo? How can one possible compete with those birds... Notice I said birds...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/4/2018 10:35:00 AM

I don't know Dory. But suited up for couriering I was mistaken for Dora the explorer more than once...

Chris Hagy

Date: 2/4/2018 10:15:00 AM

Love this little diddy Maureen! :) "...a babbling bouquet,of awe fits and rage, and you'll have to compete for my attention..." love these lines! (I love to sit in the summer and watch my birds, but of course with me people must compete with horses for my attention! ha ha) Have a lovely day :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/4/2018 10:31:00 AM

Thank you Chris! I can see it, I was a horse crazed city locked kid, didn't know I'd grow up to be a crazy bird lady ;) Alovely day to you too! xomo :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/4/2018 10:10:00 AM

Nice one...Excuse me all the same," can you tell me again your name?" I like it...or maybe I see it...Whichever...Have the best day my friend

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/4/2018 10:26:00 AM

It's so frustrating! I'll try so hard, reciting over and over to no avail, unless I can attach to something from emotional memory or imbedded preconcussion. I had a friend crack in frustration as we were doing a crossword together when I repeatedly came to the same wrong answer, "that's my damage!" I exclaimed and with that the thought cycle was broken, an emotional impact LOL ;) Lovely day to you my friend!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/4/2018 10:05:00 AM

As long as you're dancing then life is good :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/4/2018 10:20:00 AM

Exactly ;) Thanks Tim! xomo