Quirky Me

A

messy **** retentive
shy extrovert
dancing in the corner
that's me
a babbling bouquet 
of awe fits
and rage
and you'll have to compete
with the birds
for my attention
and sorry
without emotional impaction
I have no retention

can you tell me again your name?




18.02.04

Composed for Madison Demetros'
"Quirks"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Connelly Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:08 AM
A random pick but I'm glad I did Maureen. This brought a smile to my face for real. I'm happy you met your husband because I was the guy across the room doing the same thing you were doing in this poem lol. We would have never met, but for thanks to these poetry pages. The last line is a wonderful kicker lol turdus migratorus who?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 1:19 PM
I had to read it through myself ;p
Connelly Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 10:00 AM
I did try to fill in the bleep but couldn't. Thanks Maureen.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Anal was censored, how anal! Delighted you like this one, kindred spirit. xomo!
Canerdy Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:07 AM
So cute! I wonder how many OTHER people you've described! Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 9:22 AM
More than I figured lol! ;) xomo!
Barden Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:01 PM
LOL - this is so me, (except the extrovert - I am opposite - I love people, but I re-energize alone) ... you probably figured that out, though, ha! (Is my OCD showing?) Lovely write - good luck! I haven't written for this one yet ... my time has been not my own of late. <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Oh I get testy if I don't get my alone time LOL! I'm a closet extrovert, think a mouse that excels at public speaking. Can't wait to read your quirky poem! smooches <3
Hopper Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Omg! That is me and you!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Ha! I'll make more room in the corner, what do you want to hear? Yo DJ... <3
Pinet Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 11:56 AM
You paint a picture with words that brings this image alive in the reader’s mind, and we too can appreciate the charm of this character with a quirky nature and smile. Well done, Emile.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Thank you for your warm support my friend. A lovely day to you! xomo
Godwin Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 2:10 AM
Thank you for a much needed chuckle! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Poetry-hugs ... CayCay
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Thanks CayCay, delighted you enjoyed! Love "poetry-hugs"! Right back atcha! xomo :)
Chan Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Every one of your poems is like a shooter with 10 new liqueurs doing cartwheels in them. Yum! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Cheers! If I ever get a book together YOU have to write in my sleeve ;) thank you dear poet! xomo
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 9:18 PM
That is so adorable, Maureen... or you're adorable. Either way, I love your poem.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Aaah! You're awesome :) Thank you Line! xomo <3
Sands Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 12:01 PM
This is a fun poem to read Maureen, we all have our quirks lol .
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Delighted to entertain :)) we certainly do! Thank you Heidi xomo!
Hoffman Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Awesome in a word Mo! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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February 5, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you Che :) xomo!!
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Dory is a forget full fish, must have serious ADD..
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Dory, not you.. lol
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:36 AM
keep on having the words dancing off your page Mo - I sure can relate to some of your lines:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Jan! :)) xomo!
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:17 AM
So you are a bit like Dory from Finding NEmo? How can one possible compete with those birds... Notice I said birds...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:35 AM
I don't know Dory. But suited up for couriering I was mistaken for Dora the explorer more than once...
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February 4, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Love this little diddy Maureen! :) "...a babbling bouquet,of awe fits and rage, and you'll have to compete for my attention..." love these lines! (I love to sit in the summer and watch my birds, but of course with me people must compete with horses for my attention! ha ha) Have a lovely day :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Thank you Chris! I can see it, I was a horse crazed city locked kid, didn't know I'd grow up to be a crazy bird lady ;) Alovely day to you too! xomo :)
Michael Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Nice one...Excuse me all the same," can you tell me again your name?" I like it...or maybe I see it...Whichever...Have the best day my friend
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:26 AM
It's so frustrating! I'll try so hard, reciting over and over to no avail, unless I can attach to something from emotional memory or imbedded preconcussion. I had a friend crack in frustration as we were doing a crossword together when I repeatedly came to the same wrong answer, "that's my damage!" I exclaimed and with that the thought cycle was broken, an emotional impact LOL ;) Lovely day to you my friend!
Smith Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:05 AM
As long as you're dancing then life is good :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Exactly ;) Thanks Tim! xomo
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