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Quietude After Thunder

The sky edged at the hazy horizon, a solemn slate, where the raucous cloud clumps on wings of storm ride. For the sun to set for the dreary night they don’t wait, unleashed, in rampant rage they well up and glide. The opaque sky is shaken and shattered asunder, deluge of moaning drops descends in molten torrent. The endless emptiness quaked by the tearing thunder, burns in forked flashes in the fraction of time transient. The fleeting lightning designs cold lattice of azure fire, lazuli light leaves the somber sound behind, striking me with deafening echo in the rattling air, that blazes for an instant making me almost blind. The sound of falling sky sinks in the quietude of my core, as the sapphire light shimmers in the serene essence, I view the lilac lining of dismal cloud I haven’t seen before, my soul immerses in the bay of bliss with flow of silence. _____________ May 2, 2023 Contest : Up To 20 Lines Sponsored by : Sotto Poet

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Date: 5/3/2023 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed your write on Thunder. I love to hear the sound. Have a blessed day..................
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Paula for enjoying the poem.
Date: 5/3/2023 10:43:00 AM
- Beautifully described, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:43:00 PM
Tank you, Anne-Lise.
Date: 5/2/2023 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations on writing such a great poem with poetry's elegance in my contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:42:00 PM
Thank you for the placement.

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