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Quietude

Small songs at bedtime, a chorus of night music aloft from carpeted moss Crickets are hidden with a cadence and rhythm soften the weariest night _____________ 9/19/14

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Date: 1/24/2015 10:09:00 AM
I feel the silk of night Carrie>>rajat
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:34:00 PM
It's something magical to see listening to their sweet music. Congratulations on your win Carrie.
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Date: 9/28/2014 1:32:00 AM
a night filled with melodies so warm, carrie.. cheers on your stunning win.. huggs
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:29:00 PM
oooh, what a superb final line: sweeten the cadence of dark. Wow!!! Congrats on your big win, Carrie. This is a gem.
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Date: 9/27/2014 4:15:00 PM
Babies bedtime I so enjoyed rocky my son! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:06:00 AM
'Crickets in rhythm' 'A chorus of night music'...who's conducting them? I always wondered. Nice write.
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:49:00 AM
Carrie this is so true n beautiful ! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:48:00 AM
I love those night sounds, Carrie. Well done! Congrats!
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on another huge win, you are so deserving.
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:43:00 AM
This is one of my favorites Carrie.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:31:00 AM
Lovely piece, congratulations Carrie.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:11:00 AM
Excellent choka, Carrie! I love to hear crickets at night, too. Congrats on you merited win. // paul
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:03:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Carrie
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/28/2014 7:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram.... and also for catching my first pasting attempt that left out that 6th line! I appreciate your support as well !
Date: 9/20/2014 2:52:00 AM
stunning Carrie Dr Mehta will love this! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/19/2014 9:14:00 PM
SO BEAUTIFUL. Oh my I need to hurry on mine. I might be too late for this one!!!
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