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Quietly You

you’re so quiet, it’s so quiet when you come, around here, sometimes worried that you’ll leave me, nowhere, or here on the lounge, not sure if there’s a difference, be gentle yeah, be, gentle now, the space between my heart’s, beats, gets, smaller, and i breathe a breath, a little faster, now, the questions aren’t, isn’t, if or how, no what’s, or when’s cause it’s here and now, and i look at your eyes for a clue and your mouth for a sound, do you, want to be, around?, i’m not sure if i care if you do or don’t, because right, right now, you and i is what we’ve seemed to have found, so plant a seed in my chest, and look at me, like i look at you, i think that’s all i really need, right now, all you really need to do, what do you think?, is there something that you think you’ve got to prove?,

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Date: 8/6/2022 10:36:00 PM
I found this only today but still want to comment. "Something you think you've got to prove" is so perfect for that situation! I'll remember that! Elizabeth
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Date: 6/9/2022 4:31:00 PM
interesting but the depth seems to allude me....
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/10/2022 2:54:00 PM
quite correct Bryan...thanks for the headsup
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Bryan Newbey
Date: 6/9/2022 5:04:00 PM
why thank you for the comment but i’m sure you meant ‘elude’ not allude.

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