Quieting

Late evening humid
     Silence stretches out its legs
         The dog weighs heavy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 9:08 AM
This speaks volumes Grant...I enjoyed
Norwood Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 3:59 PM
thanks Tim, pleased you enjoyed it
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 7:09 AM
I can't write haiku so may not be qualified to judge but this certainly has all the right elements as far as I can tell.
Norwood Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 3:59 PM
thanks Keith...dont forget henry ford's famous quote ....whether you think you can, or you think you can't, you're right
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