Quiet, the Character

Have I been so loving,
That she is impressed,
And starts to think of one thing,
"Is there someone else?"
Is it interrupting,
When I've only yelled,
To whisper sweet nothing.
Which makes her compelled?
Should they take off running?
Am I quite the demon,
Quiet, cool, and cunning,
Not dating anyone?
Truly I repent;
I have my rights and wrongs;
Am I not your friend?
Do I not belong?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Hello Honestly J.T. I agree with Eileen just be yourself. If she don't like you, the way you are... then that person is not your friend. have a nice day my friend.
Worthy Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:38 AM
Awesome poem. I felt like the character in this poem at one point ao i totally related.
Teagan Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 11:02 PM
JT , these are the amazing writes I remember, I didn't realize you were still posting or I would have been here before now. Hope you are well Hugs
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Ooh the pain is tangible, well captured.
May Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 6:05 AM
It all comes down to friendship, Very nicely penned JT
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 3:48 AM
Of course you do, JT. Sometimes, no matter what we do, we are misunderstood. Keep being who you are, dear. hugs
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