Marie Harrison Poet ABC

Quiet Moments

Quiet Moments

Sunlight beaming through the slanted shutters
Tiny dancing dust particles floating mid-air
Underneath desk a sleeping dog snores
Vanishing baby dreams
In my quiet moments, they haunt me.

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Daver Austin June 4, 2010 at 4:21 PM I like the mysterious, beckoning, shuttered "light" in this one - complete with old dog. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown June 1, 2010 at 12:12 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Marie. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan May 31, 2010 at 4:36 PM Marie, very powerful ending - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ

Janette Fisher May 31, 2010 at 10:18 AM Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece this week - enjoyed immensely. Rgds Janette

May 30, 2010 at 2:44 PM So much packed into this concise poem. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown May 21, 2010 at 9:46 AM I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Marie. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr May 21, 2010 at 5:26 AM The imagery in this "Quiet Moments" poem is excellent. I can see it clearly. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Anthony Nutter May 21, 2010 at 3:21 AM Quiet moments allows the dreams to slip in, some plesant some not so pleasant. Intersting write.

Karen Dominick May 21, 2010 at 12:10 AM Enjoyed reading your poem.. - All the best, Karen