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Quiet Moments

Quiet Moments Sunlight beaming through the slanted shutters Tiny dancing dust particles floating mid-air Underneath desk a sleeping dog snores Vanishing baby dreams In my quiet moments, they haunt me.

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Daver Austin

Date: 6/4/2010 4:21:00 PM

I like the mysterious, beckoning, shuttered "light" in this one - complete with old dog. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2010 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Marie. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/31/2010 4:36:00 PM

Marie, very powerful ending - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/31/2010 10:18:00 AM

Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece this week - enjoyed immensely. Rgds Janette

Date: 5/30/2010 2:44:00 PM

So much packed into this concise poem. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2010 9:46:00 AM

I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Marie. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/21/2010 5:26:00 AM

The imagery in this "Quiet Moments" poem is excellent. I can see it clearly. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/21/2010 3:21:00 AM

Quiet moments allows the dreams to slip in, some plesant some not so pleasant. Intersting write.

Karen Dominick

Date: 5/21/2010 12:10:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem.. - All the best, Karen