Laurie Ginn Poet Free verse

Quiet Comptemplation

.                                                         We sat on a hill

                                       Gazing at a mere wisp of a crescent moon

                                                         In a starless sky

                                                             No words

                                                               Silent

                                                           Contemplating

                                                                  Man

                                                                  God

                                                            The Universe

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Charmaine Chircop April 30, 2009 at 1:58 PM no words silent contemplating-great reminder here,sometimes life s too busy i forget,and i lovr the way you spaced this and n the shape of a cross---bravo and thanks again for your help-ans for your kind comment---charma

Daver Austin April 30, 2009 at 7:45 AM Contemplation is great! I've done it for years. Jesus said, "Go into your closet." Hey! That's where IT is! Love, daver

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire April 29, 2009 at 8:13 AM Dear Laurie, YOU have given me peace in this Superb write LOVE the layout LOVE ALWAYS... HG

Keith Bickerstaffe April 29, 2009 at 3:48 AM Hi Laurie! Kinda shaped like a chalice... uplifting, with excellent word choices. BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

James Marshall Goff April 28, 2009 at 2:11 PM Laurie, you know I LOVE! poems with pacing-space, I love the purity of this poem...Jim

Ronald Bingham April 28, 2009 at 8:43 AM I like Carrie's comment, it just radiates peace. God Bless, Ron

Carrie Richards April 28, 2009 at 8:20 AM This would have been the most wonderful poem to fall asleep dreaming of....what peace it holds! (Wish I had had it last night). ~ love, C.

Christopher Higgins April 28, 2009 at 7:30 AM Wonderful that you are able to take time out and enjoy a minute of peace.