Quiet Champion

You’ve emptied yourself,
Abandoned giver of everything
Drifter into unknown seas
You can’t see your mirror
Covered, stained with deep self-pity
Riding high the back of sorrow
Tortured, broken.

You’ve emptied yourself, again
I bare witness, again
Shed more tears than I care to
As many times necessary
I will lift you up
You will see what I see
The leaves on the trees will green
Birds on their limbs won’t be silent
The quiet champion in you
Will rise to reclaim glory.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 6:21 PM
There is not an inessential line in this entire piece. '...the quiet champion in you will rise to reclaim glory.' Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith
Barney Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much :)
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December 3, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Deep write, Danetta, you have an amazing way with free verse. Enjoyed. SKAT
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December 3, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Thank you so much. Reading all these great poems on Poetry Soup have inspired me so much. This is a great place. :D
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