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QUIET ARCHITECTS
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Each one arrives
with a blueprint of silence,
a geometry whispered
from the throat of the sky.
They fall not to be counted,
but to fade away—
brief architects
whose cathedrals
melt on our tongues.
Look! They refuse
to repeat themselves:
a rebellion of fractures,
no two the same~
yet all of them
willing to vanish,
to sacrifice
without argument,
leaving only
the silence
of their unfinished work.
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