Quiet

HUSH ....

                                 it is always quiet after a storm

                                                  HUSH.....

                                  Mother Earth has gone to rest

                                                  HUSH ....
                                               
                                                  quiet
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Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Sometimes quiet words and people speak volumes. Well done.
Eastman Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 1:35 PM
In the quiet is when we re-strengthen ourselves... Beautifully written.
Aroke Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Quite impressive, your poem is attractive like a magnet. keep nourishing your readers with the best of poems.
Ellison Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 4:01 PM
A lovely write, my dear Laila! HUSHHHHHH! Love Jack xox
Duncan Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 5:02 PM
nice write ;}
Wesley Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:21 AM
When it's quiet we can be creative. A great time to write a poem me thinks! :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 10:03 AM
may sweet sunday bring you the hush of rest, laila.. :) huggs!
Patrikar Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 9:47 PM
WONDERFRUL
Culverhouse Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 3:18 PM
if it is quiet can you hear the earth cry? Just a thought. Enjoyed reading your poem!
Aderounmu Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 3:13 PM
HUSH! Liala, 'mother earth has gone to rest' after a safe delivery of baby rain. love and enjoyed this piece.
Song Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 6:54 PM
This poem is brief and yet it makes me feel so relaxed....nice addition with the caps too. We are getting ready to have a very strong storm here in less than an hour...the sky is dark gray and it's as tho the wind is quiet...hushhhhhh!
Gasun Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 10:26 PM
Another wonderful write, Laila. I hope mother earth will rest or have a break especially in our country where storms come consecutively... love your poem and thank you so much for sharing. A blessed and grace-filled day always. hugs :)
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Laila, i wish Mother, would come make some noise down here.. we need a storm or something... maybe loud thunder... love your verse... always~PD
B Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 8:54 AM
I like the repetition of the 'HUSH', it really identifies with the rhythm of the poem. Such is the nature of our existence to weather the storms for that relatively brief moment of silence. Thanks for sharing this, great poem.
Grisetti Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Soft and simple, a lovely poem.
Ishmael Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 8:22 AM
ok laila we will hush ,very nice
Ellison Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 3:39 PM
WOW! Love this one, my friend! Nice poem... big hugs, Jack
Austin Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Thanks for reading my poetry, Laila. I love your pastoral touch. daver
Horne Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 1:57 PM
lovely write, Laila
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 11:31 AM
a sweet sense of stillness that leaves me peacefully entranced, laila.. great work!..:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 8:09 AM
imaginative portrait of the lull before and after yhe storm Laila.. feeling vast emotion luv..
Northeast Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Nice- so peaceful- you have really captured a moment : ) blessings. bren : )
Madonsela Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Enjoying this write Laila, awesome stuff. *smiles* Ron
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Such a feeling of peace I get reading these lovely lines this morning! Thanks for sharing. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 4:29 AM
I really like this one..Sometimes there is an eerie quiet before one also...Thanks for stopping by..Fire Ants were imported into the USA from South America..In South America they have natural enemies which help keep the population in check but here in the south in USA they don't have any enemies and they have spread out all over..They can't survival in areas where the ground freezes for 2 to 3 weeks at a time so authorities on insects think..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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