Quiescent

tunnels underground

chipmunks curl up for a nap

on a bed of grass







3rd place
ANIMAL FALL HAIKU CONTEST
Sponsored by: ANDREA DIETRICH

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De R

October 10, 2010 at 11:15 AM

Congrats on your win with this wonderful haiku:) Emilia

Francine Roberts

October 9, 2010 at 10:52 PM

lovely imagery Wilma , congrats on your win

James Fraser

October 9, 2010 at 7:25 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this cute image >> James

Harry Horsman

October 9, 2010 at 12:23 AM

congrats on this winner Wilma, awesome. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 8, 2010 at 1:21 PM

Congrats Wilma dear friend on your win in Andrea's contest with this super descriptive entry.. enjoy another victory dance today with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

October 8, 2010 at 1:11 PM

Congratulations on your win with this great haiku, dear Wilma! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 8, 2010 at 12:29 PM

aaack haha we posted at the same time this made me realize how sick I am posting at 330am?? ok I'm going I'm going now-- yup I love sleep but seriously lack sleep-- bye for now-- zzzzz hugs hahaha my captcha is ZZTT Soup telling to to catch ZZ coz I look like this : T_T

Sara Kendrick

October 8, 2010 at 11:19 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 8, 2010 at 11:18 AM

comfy, comfy , comfy-- maybe I can snuggle in between too? lol? Super congrats Wilma-- this was such a cool haiku :) & of course you had to write a haiku on sleeping lol :) -- hugs nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 8, 2010 at 9:26 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

October 8, 2010 at 7:47 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your 3ard place. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 8, 2010 at 5:40 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2010 at 4:26 AM

Now this is truly haiku, Wilma. Glad to see you in my top three. LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

October 1, 2010 at 4:34 PM

Hi! Wilma, what a beauty,nature and it's course, a true an excellent way to enjoy and read your Haiku. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.

Gert W. Knop

October 1, 2010 at 3:05 PM

Hey Wilma! Pragtige Haiku, geniet die lees by laat ure ... Al die beste ... Gert:!)

Michael J. Falotico

September 30, 2010 at 2:13 PM

Now thats a sweet Haiku!!!! hit home and made me smile...love Michael

James Fraser

September 30, 2010 at 2:12 PM

Aww, this is so cute, it's gorgeous >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 29, 2010 at 12:12 PM

I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Wilma. the best to you in Andrea's contest if you enter it. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

September 29, 2010 at 10:41 AM

That's one way to stay warm and comfy, Wilma! Very cute image and this gem should do well in Andrea's contest. Wishing you success as always. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

September 29, 2010 at 9:10 AM

Reads of warmth and happiness, however, I am not found of chipmonks..Great work..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my blog and the support..Sara

Harry Horsman

September 29, 2010 at 7:03 AM

like this Wilma. Harry

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