Quiescent

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Quagmire, Quest, Quiescent Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Written 2/5/2024

The night enlightenment in with quiescent stage Of nature, refining gracious and endless age. Shadows dance rhapsody round slumber's existence As evening due settles discreetly some distance. A vision, a red velvet rosebud of beauty a subtle sweetness scent, sensual, and fruity. Spring breast inner quiescence echoes ebullient, Nature's reverence favorable ambient.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2024 9:43:00 AM

Very impressive winning work. Way to go.Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Congratulations. Sara K

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2024 5:44:00 AM

Eve, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, hugs, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/13/2024 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your lovely "Quiescent" write. Enjoy your day with your win...................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/6/2024 11:27:00 AM

So lovely, Eve! Peaceful. Restful! I think you really zeroed in the the essence of quiescence. Best wishes for the contest. Blessing, dear friend. Hope all is well with you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/6/2024 11:02:00 AM

Spring breast inner quiescence echoes ebullient. What a perfect poetic line. Hope you are well. Hugs.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/6/2024 4:15:00 AM

Gosh, what an enchanting and breathtaking poem this is, dear Eve..You absolutely bewitched my heart with this line "A vision, a red velvet rosebud of beauty" Wow!! That left me speechless and in sheer awe..You possess wonderful and artistic skills of conveying words in such a soulful way..I love how you've expressed the quiescent stage of night, in a creative reflection.."a subtle sweetness scent, sensual, and fruity" The use of adjectives is absolutely profound and eloquent. Loved reading this