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Quid Pro Quo?!

Ascending unto the fourth pinnacles auspicious plyth ~ To quantumly observe these plateaus regions of oeuvre Molten monograms of monarchies scripted immure; immolating These gravitating exhibits of perceptions inter alia Past particles of meticulously latticed perplexities.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....Quid pro quo?! Note: Smile ~ "Its 'A Beautiful Day' &, 'Love,' Always," John!:) ~

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C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/23/2010 11:49:00 PM

Just stopped by to wish a peaceful Christmas,to a special friend who treated me always with care and supported my poetry for quite a while!Happy Christmas,with love,dear John. Always C.C or as you call me 'Tinkerbell' :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/23/2010 4:31:00 PM

A fluid, melodic treasure of intriguing thoughts, John. I've read it several times and hang on each line. Beautiful! Merry Christmas, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 12/23/2010 8:00:00 AM

Hey John, 'A Beautiful Day', though it's snowing here.:) Falling as though undecided, but with determination. "Quid pro quo" something for something else, an equal exchange? A very profound piece, and one that lets the mind wander. God Jul/Feliz Navidad, John. Love to you, Mikki

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/23/2010 7:10:00 AM

Another materpiece John. Your words are profoundly powerful and poetic. I am so happy you stopped by and commented on my work so I can enjoy your works of art...Lay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2010 6:12:00 AM

Impressive vocabulary and like charlotte here said, great alliteration, john. How do you come up with it? Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/22/2010 11:10:00 AM

It has to be this way, when you think about it, dear John, eh? Maintaining the natural balance, always, I say .. whether in the physical realm or not I believe that's how it flows. Another brilliant and beautiful gem! Love always, Audrey

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/22/2010 7:30:00 AM

lol well it's about time monsieur.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/20/2010 11:16:00 AM

Yes, your joy is quite natural as it's a beautiful season of reason, john

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/20/2010 9:15:00 AM

Classic and artistically penned.Have a great week dear John!C.C

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/19/2010 2:44:00 PM

there is such an elegance about your writing, and I love your use of alliteration which I recall from other poems of yours, very skilful writing indeed ~ Smile ~

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 12/19/2010 11:12:00 AM

it's not only a beautiful day,it's a beautiful time :) ....peace , jay