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Quicksand

Quicksand
Written: 5-8-16

“Staring at a rose bush from a distance
It’s truth hid behind its beauty
Falling off a cliff, hoping you might be catched
Knowing deep down, he never will


His perspective on life had me falling
I fell into a quicksand pit,
Didn’t realize I was sinking
Months went by without knowing


Certain songs played strangled my brain
They told me that time could solve this
Curious about its purpose, yet blank stare
Brain disconnected from my heart


My time and feelings were swept away
Broom of memories all in a picture now
Thoughts of affection together would poison me
Expectations of the future would shatter my heart


He’s in love with someone else,
Those loves songs are for a different circuit
All those heart pounding moments,
Were just pointless exercises on your heart


Circumstances, timing, and judgement
Those things will always be glued to him
Take a step back, and unleash yourself
There’s other dogs in the park to love”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/5/2016 3:31:00 PM
You are very hurt Joy.I can read that from your poetry.I hope you find happiness in your life.In fact I hope that we both find happiness in our lives.
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Joy Re
Date: 11/5/2016 3:43:00 PM
This was written about a year ago actually, so I'm doing so much better. Thank you though! :) Sometimes we can only learn certain lessons from experiencing certain kinds of pain. But in the end it turns out alright. :)
Date: 11/5/2016 3:12:00 PM
Very powerful poetry Joy. May happiness be what you find. :)
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Joy Re
Date: 11/5/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)

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