Quicksand

On a silent journey,
I walked into the forest.
Within the dark,
A silhouette crept me out.

Suddenly I stumbled
And fell into a quicksand pit.
A cry for help—
No one to hear.

The more I struggled,
It pulled me deeper and deeper.
When I couldn’t breathe anymore,
I gave up the fight.

Slowly, it released me,
Letting me float.
Desperate and crazed,
I tried to swim with force—
Only to sink again.

So I stayed calm.
I did not cry.
I tried my best
To reach the shore.

Slowly, gently,
I rolled myself free,
Breathing a sigh of relief.

And I realized:
Sometimes all I need
Is to do my best—
And wait for time.

In chaos I found calm,
In silence I found strength.

Through the dark forest I walked on,
Until the sun came down,
Lighting my path anew.

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David Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 10:08 PM
Beautiful! I love your poem. Well done, bard.
Agustin Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 11:11 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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