Richard Ferry Poet Free verse

Quick Sand Build Your Own Sand

Sinking      Deeper and Deeper       Into a Pit      Of brilliant Gloom       Once Secured       In my Mother`s        Gentle womb      Within becomes Without        Causing little Doubt    I need to Shout       Help me Out       Before my impending Doom                                        Richard Ferry     9/11/2013

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Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2013 at 10:02 PM Coming here to say hi, I wonder if you have any poems I have not seen. I will try to look a bit and see!! Richard Ferry October 10, 2013 at 11:55 PM Hello Andrea My writes are not as polished as yours by any means..I just put down thoughts in my own style and submit to Soup..Tell the truth..Never spend more than ten minutes or so putting something down on paper..Sometimes I get lucky and I receive praise from fellow soupers....Just wanted to thank you again for following my thoughts..Your fellow souper and friend Rick

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2013 at 1:09 AM very interesting one. I rather like this, Richard. It has a deeper meaning than most I am seeing. Richard Ferry September 14, 2013 at 4:06 PM I know You see the futility in this one