Quick Encounters

Some people are just uncomfortable
She is putting on a smile
under her mask
I don’t know if it’s her
or it’s me
She’s nice, a little hurried
Even her son’s spirit
seems lost to the horizon
They are no strangers

Some people hurry
and still
make me feel safe
mask or no mask

There is a message
tucked away
behind one’s flesh

I can meet a stranger
even have a quick encounter
and feel kinship

The lady in the Santa hat
ringing her bell
at this time of year
as if she’s always been there
She’s warm

Her message says, “Hello.”
Nothing nefarious, truly kind

Don’t get me wrong
it could be me…

Maybe I’m too approachable
encroaching in an unwanted space…

Still the angel
that went to heaven
had wide open arms

it could be me…
I will always wonder
but then I’m too old
to be bothered
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 3:46 AM
Back with congratulations on your poem being on the best new 100 poems' list. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 4:02 AM
Thank you so much, Sara!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A wonderful write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Thank you and for telling me. I didn’t know! :)
Wood Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 3:08 PM
It's a wonderful time of year. More genuine, less guarded. Congratulations on this recognition. Good to see you are still writing.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dean! Blessings!
Bayles Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 8:26 AM
A great portrayal of a conflict we face. On the surface, we're smiling, but are troubled inside. It leaves us wondering.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Truly! Oh one day in heaven we can wonder to our heart’s content and see miles and miles of smiles! :)
Hind Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Very personal yet deep... I could see you walking around a mall somewhere. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 8:15 PM
I was at Sam’s Club. Mall’s are a bit scary nowadays. I don’t visit them often.
Sands Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 5:14 AM
Very nice poem to read today Kim. Well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:29 PM
An enjoyable read, Sorry for posting so little. Getting old. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 5:32 AM
No problem, my friend xx
Buehler Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Your poem is just delightful, and so true, Kim. Oftentimes chance encounters leave lasting impressions. Others involve simply a smile or a kind word. Beautifully written! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 8:29 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! :)
Sharma  Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Oh, this poem is quite insightful and reflective.. Sometimes, people whom we know, can possess a certain uncomfortable aura and those strangers can bring us a special joy whom we have met in just few moments.. You've presented those feelings and thoughts in a very intriguing way here.. Wonderfully crafted.. And that ending as well! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Thank you, Hiya! I appreciate you!
One Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 11:56 AM
I know a few people like this.. well expressed Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 7:44 PM
How about those 'dark-alley' Santas? Ever have a quick encounter with one of them? No beards, no gifts, no muss, no fuss. ~ Robbed and Pillaged
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Thankfully no but I do remember one horror movie where scary Santa shows up at the door. Beware the elf that shows up in your home…lol.
Brotherton Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Your last stanza brings it home for me. Yes, I could wonder but I am too old to care.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:01 AM
For sure! Hugs
Rolland Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:55 PM
so lovely words, and kind message for our hearts, njoyed this warm poem as we all need, take care poet
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Thank you kindly, Yann! :)
Fisher Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:21 PM
Enjoyed a nice look into one of best parts of the busy-ness of life. Kinship is such a good feeling. Loved the last stanza, and it seems like it's probably them.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:02 AM
And I thank you for that…lol
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