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Q Words Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

8/1/2023

Quibble

Summer began in a small country home; forest's shadow and fields a dog can roam. A kiss of radiant warmth lay this day, off wild running and chasing in gay play. Like other children we trifling quibble, over childish senseless art we scribble. QUIBBLE over who's going to be first, QUIBBLE who's acting like the very worst. Though harmless quibble with one another before twilight falls, still love each other.
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Anaya Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on the Qword win, Eve. Quibble great word! We can learn from our children's play. Perfect picture for the poem. I wanted to thank you for the blog you posted, I have been praying that Victor is on the mend and quickly returns. Xhugs -Anaya
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading it again. What a fun write/picture. Have a great day with your win............
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:10 AM
A creative/fun ~ write/picture. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.............
Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 2:46 AM
Sweet childhood days, Eve, lovely write:)
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 1:33 AM
Bet they quibble more during the long school holidays too lol:-) great word choice Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Seeker Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 1:03 AM
Sweetness of innocence in childlike playfulness :)
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