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Questions of Space

The sky way beyond where deep space exists Following the realms of deepest blackness Only some intervals do stars approach And can brighten your soul in the darkness The light brings an enhanced feel all without As you go, nebulas are formed outside As you move along it goes endlessly Space does not finish, there’s no stars beside Time’s different out here, where does it go Without light the mood crashes from beyond I don’t believe there’s any use out here The other systems you would surely bond Not knowing how to reach these best systems There are questions by some persons today The unknown fascinates many people Leading us to guess what’s there anyway
Russell Sivey Contest: Why? Sponsor: Barbara Gorelick 6/3/2013

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Date: 2/5/2014 4:10:00 AM
Russell, my friend, what is going on? How this has happened? Please let me know!
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:15:00 AM
I've always loved seeing the pictures of the gorgeous nebulae, taken from the Hubble telescope. It's too much for our tiny minds to take in such infinite splendor. Good luck on the contest! Space talk is always a winner in my book :)
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Date: 6/3/2013 3:57:00 AM
Ohhhhh!! From some of the pictures the beauty is just wonderful..Enjoyed reading your creative idea..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2013 3:14:00 AM
Excellent work with metaphysical connotations, inspiring and imaginative! Good luck my friend! 7!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/5/2014 3:53:00 AM
Russell, my friend, how come this person uses your site to write comments like this? I am certain you would never have written such things to me and to the rest! Who is this Daniel harper? Do you know him?
Date: 6/3/2013 1:16:00 AM
Excellent. Very meaningful write. Enjoyed it. Tfs
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 2/4/2014 10:04:00 PM
I am not indian for your information.
Date: 6/3/2013 12:19:00 AM
Very deep meaning Russel. I have read most of your comments specially on Demetrios and Richard. And I have read many of your poems. They are absolutely gorgeous. I am learning from all of you poets. Thanks to all/ manel
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