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I can feel you holding me tight, While I am sleep during the night.
In my dreams,I see what you are thinking.
A thunder cloud bursts as if you are speaking.
I wake up to hear the pitter-patter of your feet.
The freshness of your voice makes my blossoms smell sweet.
I knew you were there because my day went right.
I met a lover who also wants to hold me tight.
Together their is nothing we can't do,
cause deep in my heart ; I belive that it was you.
A sword had been drawn, filling me with hope to carry on;
with my reason to ware;as I had been born.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 10, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Derrick. Love, Carol
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March 9, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Interesting write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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