Robin Davis Poet Rhyme

Questioning Love

Please tell me what I ever did
To always make you flip your lid
Pushing me right out the door
You couldn't take it anymore
I would like an explanation
All my love and dedication
I kept saving up for you
Proving that my love was true
As the days and weeks went by
There was something in your eyes
That kept saying silently
You no longer cared for me
So I doubled up the love
Extra kisses-- Tighter hugs
More touching -- Lots of caressing
But your eyes kept me distressing
No more sparkles glowing bright
The darkness took away a light
That I used to see each morning
All my thoughts are now just swarming
About the way your angry grip 
Ended our relationship
Saying never come back here
A mean voice and not one tear
Showing one bit of remorse
Of the love that you just lost

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Just That Archaic Poet October 24, 2013 at 10:57 AM I hope no one has ever abused you; the thought makes me angry to think of such a gentle Soul like you being mistreated. I think you are conveying something which many of us have all felt at some point or another in our lives: rejection, which is most hurtful. Another powerful poem you've penned, dear friend <3