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Questioning

Questioning
  why
I refuse
 to erase
 a history
   lived
passionately
  why
Questioning
   myself
left alone
  allow
a river carry
  away my
sinking feelings
  rush them
  get lost
 towards
the stream 
a point of
drowning
  due to
exhaustion.

Questioning
my confusion
  why not
 absorb
 my anger
 visualize
with glazing eyes
a destination
 to land
my soundless
    voice
 towards
  reality
our closeness
      is
 doomed.

Questioning
 my sobriety
     never
   impose 
     when
hope to cope
  dissolves
  Oh! twister
    whirl me
   strongly
    towards
spring showers
  wet my
   brain
  a drop
of water
to surface
  intact.

 Answering?
my confidence
 whispered
    be
determined
  to feel
when words
   decides
    choose
   Freedom.

 Therese Bacha
25 June 2013

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/28/2013 11:34:00 PM so good to catch you as I am going off for the night. was wondering about you since I last posted a message to you. I could see you were on the Soup tonight because I just saw you commenting to someone. So nice to see you around here. I had a nice day but gotta finally get offline. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 9/29/2013 10:57:00 PM Hi Andrea, I think I answered yo yesterday, but I see there is no message. I will write tomorrow more details. Hope u are good. Love u Terry

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/29/2013 6:40:00 PM This is another great poemj of yours.. Your talent shows in the words you write. There is nothing like being free. Thank you and God bless..... Lucilla Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/29/2013 9:32:00 PM Lucy, so happy to see u here, was worried. Thank you. I am fine. Terry xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/28/2013 11:33:00 PM Fantastic, powerful, poetic! Great work! 7! You are inspiring! Loved it! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/29/2013 9:33:00 PM Hi Demetrios, thank you so much, so happy you passed by. Hope you are good. Terry xo

Christine Phillips Date: 6/28/2013 8:17:00 PM Lovely imagery Therese...Indeed freedom is the best thing that everyone is entitled to in life and I am glad that you chosen that path. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/28/2013 9:16:00 PM HI, thank you so much for passing by. Sometimes you feel it other times you need it. Bye Terry

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/28/2013 1:22:00 AM love your images here, Terry. and how you say to choose freedom. So good to see a new post from you. I saw that poem of yours with the pretty artwork. But could not leave a reply. I'm glad you are enjoying that space!! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/28/2013 8:05:00 PM Hi Andrea, miss u, hope you are better. Thank you, you are a darling as usual. see u terry

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 6/27/2013 7:06:00 PM Decide to choose freedom! You are a wise lady.....terrific write! Hugs Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/27/2013 7:13:00 PM Yes my lady, being wise at the right moment, spares us a lot of pain. Take care Terry xo

Michael Ainsley Date: 6/27/2013 6:45:00 PM Choose Freedom........ Oh yes Fly high Therese Just stopped by to say Hi. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/27/2013 7:12:00 PM Hi Michael, hope you are doing fine, not to bored I hope. I think you are British? I try everyday to remind myself, life is beautiful, no matter what. Bye. Love Terry xoxo

Donna Jones Date: 6/25/2013 6:15:00 PM Wow....this was a twister....awesome.... Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 6:25:00 PM Hi Donna, thank you so much. Tying to change my style. Love T. xoxo

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/25/2013 3:08:00 PM So many questions we ask in a lifetime .and the answers we answered yesterday are different from those we answer today.Life once filled with passionate moments live only in our memory now..but tnk God for those moments lived and thank God for the changes xause everyday is a blessing even if left unnotuced...big hug dear Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 6:26:00 PM Hi Charmaine, missed you, thank you for sharing. See u later. LOve Terry xoxo

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/25/2013 5:10:00 AM Uniquely creative work that you have penned..Very expressive and emotive..Dentist and doctor's appointments today..Sara Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 2:38:00 PM Hi Sara, hope you will be fine. Will stay in touch. Terry

Russell Sivey Date: 6/24/2013 10:43:00 PM This write has such raw emotion to it! I felt it with each line of your poem! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! what a powerful poem, you told it so magnificently! Great Work!! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/24/2013 11:08:00 PM Hi my friend. Still awake? Here in Montreal its 1 AM......not sleepy. I am so happy you are back. You were always the first to encourage me, glad you are. Good luck with your studies. Love Terry xo