Question For the Groom

Question to the Groom When you stride that Southern aisle Splendid in the tux that she picked out With my children at your side As your pals all drink and shout… When the sky’s a brilliant blue Matching eyes that stole my heart Will you pause to think of us And the dreams that fell apart? © 2013

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/24/2013 7:02:00 AM

OH MY!!!!!!!!! THIS IS HEART RENDING!!!! Oh dear me. Victoria...those blue eyes are always trouble makers. What an amazing poem......Totally caught me by surprise. On another note....hope that your Christmas fills you with joy. HUGS

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 12/24/2013 6:53:00 PM

Eileen, thanks for reading....I hesitate to post personal anecdote poetry,but am getting braver....Happy Holidays to you, as well! V

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 4:00:00 AM

Victoria, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 12/24/2013 6:54:00 PM

Thanks, Linda....Best wishes to you, as well...And, you are the Sweetest!