Question

Is My Poems Even Good...   
Feel Like It's not Good At All   
My Life Sucked In Being Creative   
So Please Tell Me What You Like;   
I Don't Get Many Reads   
Nor Likes   
My Feelings   
Are Thinking   
On Everything 
Poems Are All I Have   
But I Feel Weak That maybe   
I Shouldn't Write   
My Heart Hurts From All The Pain,   
 That's Shoots Up Through My Vains   
I Can't Take My No More , 
About To Scream  .... 
If No Answer Shows, 
When Looking At These Ugly Walls that I see 
On How I Wish   
I can Break Them,   
For More Better Thoughts   
Emotion After Another   
I Know I Need To Stop Worrying   
On  What others Think, 
But Damn That Thought 
Of Knowing What Others Are Feeling Make me Wonder.   
..... 
So As I Write Another Story Told.   
Thanks For These Reads,   
It's Time To Pray For Good Thoughts   
And not Giving Up   
On My Poems   
And Giving Me Good Shows for Comments
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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Be kind to your muse, as we at ps will be kind to you.
Jameel Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Kind of how I feel when I feel spacey and blank good work
Evans Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 2:24 PM
THANK U!!
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