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out of sight or out of mind i have spent half of my life with an invisible injury if i recover who will i be ***

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/14/2020 6:15:00 AM

This might as well be the poem of everyone, for everyone, i have no idea about myself, never will. Im forever throwing myself away. Great poetry mo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/14/2020 9:11:00 AM

I try to write with that in mind, but hadn't thought of that here. A wow thank you. It's quite an awe inspiring experience living with so much grey matter. I'm sitting on "forever throwing myself away" for a while. xomo

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/3/2018 11:06:00 AM

You will be you...from your poetry and comments to others, you can be no other. I like your straightforward style. Really like this poem.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/3/2018 1:41:00 PM

Thank you kindly Sandra :) xomo!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/1/2018 6:46:00 AM

Your authentic self; beautifully done.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/1/2018 7:57:00 AM

You are so sweet, thank you M.L. :) It is a very interesting place to be I must say. A lovely day to you! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/13/2018 2:02:00 PM

"Be yourself, everyone else is taken," that's a quote but can't remember who said it!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/13/2018 10:28:00 PM

I love that one :)) xomo!

Charles Messina

Date: 9/5/2018 1:01:00 PM

You will be who ever you want to be, but I suspect you will still be that terrific poetess you've always been. I like this, Maureen. xo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/5/2018 8:47:00 PM

Sounds fabulous to me :) Thank you Charles! xomo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2018 7:57:00 AM

That is a good question. A lot of time our identity is tied closely to our affliction. It is the interface with which we identify with our surroundings. Our injuries also provide us with the capacity to empathize with other wounded travelers.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/5/2018 10:32:00 AM

Lovely said Richard, I believe that to be true. The idea of "being", not just "surviving" is a titillating thought. It's like I just turned the light on a previously dark corridor, the future. Thank you Richard, xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/3/2018 1:50:00 PM

It seems to me that you will be you, sans your former injury...That part of you will be gone (if you recover)… Kind of like an amputee, only much better! ~ gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/4/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you my wolfman.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/4/2018 2:57:00 AM

I'm so sorry for all of the pain and suffering you must have endured, my dear friend. I never could have imagined that you ever had the least injury to your brain, given how incredibly sharp and perceptive you are... May your life proceed on an upward curve only from now on. ~ In eternal admiration, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 2:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I'm me to a fault, that'll never change ;) a full recovery is not an attainable goal, but lessening symptoms and regaining my life is an exciting prospect. One severe and three mild traumatic brain injuries later (and then some) I am at last finding my feet and forging a path, one step at a time towards... who I can be; yes, better for the experience. Mo mo than ever before xo

Chris Green

Date: 9/3/2018 11:27:00 AM

I say you will still be out of (your) mind, just like the rest of us poets. : ) This was fun Mo.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 12:34:00 PM

Well that's a given ;) thank you! <3 xomo

Tim Smith

Date: 9/3/2018 9:40:00 AM

I think you just might be the queen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 12:33:00 PM

In a 60's/70's muscle car, I would definately be queen. Yum hum.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/3/2018 8:30:00 AM

You will be invisible lol...great verse my friend...love & light...^WW^

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 9:22:00 AM

Giggles ;) I'll be able to love myself more with a little help... helping myself to the help, not waiting for our medical system: lol. xomo!

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/3/2018 8:40:00 AM

...we love you just the way you are, Mo...^WW^

John Lawless

Date: 9/3/2018 7:30:00 AM

...or who won't you be any longer?? Or as the bumper sticker says "Be yourself - everyone else is taken"...hang in there Mo for "the only constant in life - is change"

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 7:37:00 AM

Exactly! I almost want a bumper to sport that ;) running the gamut of emotions with hope at the top, thank you John, xomo!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/3/2018 1:33:00 AM

You will be you, and I say that with the certainly of one who knows what you are saying! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 9/3/2018 9:39:00 AM

The 5.0 is better...rag top stang

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 7:15:00 AM

Yup, Mo 2.0 (I got that from aTed Talk on topic;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2018 1:21:00 AM

Good question Maureen, I suppose at first you would feel like something was missing from your life. But , you would still be you. Tom

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 7:19:00 AM

Giggles, I can't help but be me, believe you me that ;) things have been missing, looking forward to getting me, whatever version of me that is, back. Thank you Tom :) hugs xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/3/2018 12:11:00 AM

Wonderful poem, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Line <3

Sand Blown

Date: 9/2/2018 10:55:00 PM

lol...good one

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2018 7:24:00 AM

I'm glad someone sees the humour in this ;) sense of humour beneficial to survival after all. xomo