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'quenched Thirst'

gully of water
trickle down, forming fissures…
dried flowers thirst quenched   


Contest: Nature Comes To Life
2nd Place

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Kash Poet

March 1, 2011 at 5:30 AM

Very lively Haiku here!Congrats Wilma on your well deserved win---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

February 28, 2011 at 8:40 PM

VEry nice, Wilma, how wonderful water can be if even a trickle for a thirsting plant. Congratulations. I somehow had missed this one!!

Francine Roberts

February 28, 2011 at 8:17 PM

wonderful haiku Wilma, congrats on your win in the contest

Sara Kendrick

February 28, 2011 at 5:40 PM

Congratulations on your win with very creative work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 28, 2011 at 1:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Carol, Wilma

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 10:25 AM

Hello Wlima, This is beautiful my dear, congratulations on a well deserved win in the contest. Lov, Shar

John Freeman

February 28, 2011 at 10:07 AM

Good to see you poem at the top wilma. Congratulations on your poem's honored second place recognition.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 28, 2011 at 7:15 AM

Congrats Wilma my friend on your second place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. full of wonderful imagery and warm lines.. enjoyed reading once again.. as u enjoy your top spot luv..

Tahera Mannan

February 28, 2011 at 7:01 AM

Wilma this is so exquisite.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 6:09 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Wilma. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 2:21 PM

Splendid imagery in this piece so sweetly written Wilma.. a joy to read and absorb the lovely lines .. those flowers thrist quenched is amazing..luv..

James Peranteau

February 27, 2011 at 5:41 AM

I read Mr. Frasers comment Wilma; oh how he summed up your write perfectly ! Awesome Haiku dear poet ! Picture perfect ! much love, james

James Fraser

February 26, 2011 at 9:35 AM

Watching a quenched plant in quick time as it thrives on water is simply amazing Wilma. Like kisses on the nape, one becomes alive and desires life.....:)

Audrey Haick

February 25, 2011 at 11:35 AM

Very lovely imagery, especially seeing the dying flowers below being soaked slowly but surely with life-giving water, Wilma. I enjoyed this. Love, Annalise