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Queen of the Dance

Friday is dance night We all go to have some fun We twirl and whirl and jump around Till the music is done He asks "May I have this dance?" The answer is "yes you may" He holds you close in a slow dance It is the only way The song is over, you turn to leave He asks for one more please And you agree again to be held His heart is on his sleeve The person you meet may be the one Who will hold you now and forever But he may also be a passing man Who will not be in your life ever. A lack of partners is not a problem Everyone wants to dance To find someone to care for and love Never has even a remote chance

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2015 9:33:00 AM

I hear the Queen of the dance is going full force! Love ya.

Mama Bear
Date: 5/17/2015 3:20:00 PM

This queen is rocking!!!!! But then so is your sister. Love you too Mom

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2015 4:15:00 PM

Hi Mama Bear! Just stumbled on this lovely poem tonight. I'm already accounted for, but I'm sure I would still enjoy having a dance with you:) Hope next Friday somebody special will turn up! // paul

Mama Bear
Date: 5/13/2015 5:17:00 PM

Lots of lovely people but no one special for now. Thanks for asking me to dance I would love to. Blessings Edith

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/13/2015 1:06:00 PM

I can imagine the scene being played out. You are a good story teller. "Everyone wants to dance", a truism even in the larger stage that's life. I enjoyed your write, Mama Bear. Belated Happy Mother's Day! Kim :-)

Mama Bear
Date: 5/13/2015 2:18:00 PM

Kim thanks for the visit and the Mother's Day wishes Was blessed as Richard wrote such a lovely poem for me on his site and both his siblings did the same for me. Wonderful to have children Am truly blessed Hugs Edith

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/6/2015 11:28:00 AM

This poem was sad, believable and just human enough to be easily relatable. Emile.

Mama Bear
Date: 5/6/2015 4:32:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words. It really is what it is like out in our present world Blessings Edith

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/4/2015 8:56:00 AM

All it takes is one!

Mama Bear
Date: 5/4/2015 9:01:00 AM

Yes so true but he has to be extremely special That seems to be an impossibility Love Mom