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She was like the midnight sky On the coldest winter night Not even one star in sight Her eyes afraid of moonlight. I placed a rainbow in her heart But her eyes only saw darkness Instead of vibrant fresh colours Her soul bled black drops of pain. Simple Musing Silent One 2 December 2020

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Tonye George

Date: 11/21/2023 4:05:00 PM

Her soul always bleeds, that is what she's known for. Nice one!

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 5/31/2021 6:00:00 AM

Great write about -a wasteful girl! Sad but glorious Love the visual contrasts

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/13/2021 9:17:00 AM

Powerful poetry, SO. No ambiguity versed in this visceral ink. I agree w/Ms. Sikorski ... you are a master of mood enhanced poetry. Love and peace forever.

Kimberly Sikorski

Date: 3/31/2021 12:22:00 PM

I love the somber mood of this piece ! The only color WE see ,....the rainbow. But for this soul, no light, no color, only darkness. Smiles ! Kim Sikorski

Niyna Desangre

Date: 1/25/2021 3:27:00 PM

Never ask how a person got to be that way. Life will give you a living example of how things come to be. A precious heart covered in compressed despair. The only star she knows shines in your eyes so keep the light on for her.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/9/2021 10:55:00 AM

Sad when one is too desperate to see the reflection of the rainbow,to not be able to see that somebody cares.Heart-moving poem.Happy New Year S.O

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/16/2020 7:49:00 AM

Nice one Silent One - your emotions are evident as well as your usual talent. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Rekha Antony

Date: 12/7/2020 1:26:00 AM

Deeply touched

Eve Roper

Date: 12/6/2020 8:15:00 PM

Beautiful and very deep emotions. love it

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/5/2020 4:59:00 PM

A nice contrast between the light and the dark in this wonderful poem. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/5/2020 5:00:00 AM

Such a sadness in her.

Silent One
Date: 12/5/2020 9:46:00 AM

Thank you..

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/4/2020 3:26:00 PM

Sometimes the dark is the safest for others. They crash and burn with the light! Darkly beautiful little poem, twinny :)

Silent One
Date: 12/5/2020 9:46:00 AM

Thank you..

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/3/2020 5:38:00 PM

So sad. People can get caught in darkness, either temporarily or long term. Well written Silent One ! :)

Silent One
Date: 12/5/2020 9:46:00 AM

Thank you..

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/3/2020 4:03:00 PM

Darkness comes in many forms, none more frightening than when it comes from within

Silent One
Date: 12/5/2020 9:46:00 AM

Thank you..

Paul Callus

Date: 12/3/2020 12:52:00 PM

dark & melancholic. better to be a peasant in a joyous mood. Regards // paul

Silent One
Date: 12/5/2020 9:46:00 AM

Thank you..

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 12/3/2020 2:52:00 AM

Sometimes when humans are hurt beyond measure, damage is irreversible. So be good always. Nice message in a small write.

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:33:00 AM

That is true and you cant save everyone.. Thank you

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/2/2020 8:26:00 PM

When darkness has settled in, it can be difficult for any light to shine through. Sad indeed. ~ Brandy

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:34:00 AM

Very true and some succumb to the darkness, lost forever.. Thank you..

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/2/2020 8:05:00 PM

A lovely contrast of darkness and light. It's a Fave.

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:35:00 AM

Thank you.. Glad you liked

Fj Thomas

Date: 12/2/2020 6:12:00 PM

So beautifully dark... so beautiful

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:41:00 AM

Thank you..

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/2/2020 5:15:00 PM

A wonderful write, Silent One. The last line says it all...

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:41:00 AM

Thank you..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2020 3:30:00 PM

Sad and colorful in a dark way. Enjoyed reading your emotive work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2020 2:37:00 PM

very sad and dark. But that aside, I really like this!!!

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you..

Ifeanyi Nwokeabia

Date: 12/2/2020 2:06:00 PM

Truly a queen of darkness.she detests light. This is beautiful.

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you..

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/2/2020 1:10:00 PM

Sad and beautiful at the same time, pain intricately woven through every line. Lovely Silent One... Belle

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:43:00 AM

Thank you..

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 12/2/2020 10:13:00 AM

Good one

Silent One
Date: 12/3/2020 4:44:00 AM

Thank you..