Silent One Poet Free verse

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Queen of Darkness

She was like the midnight sky
On the coldest winter night
Not even one star in sight
Her eyes afraid of moonlight.

I placed a rainbow in her heart
But her eyes only saw darkness
Instead of vibrant fresh colours
Her soul bled black drops of pain.

Simple Musing
Silent One
2 December 2020

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Tonye George November 21, 2023 at 4:05 PM Her soul always bleeds, that is what she's known for. Nice one!

Ingrid Showalter Swift May 31, 2021 at 6:00 AM Great write about -a wasteful girl! Sad but glorious Love the visual contrasts

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 13, 2021 at 9:17 AM Powerful poetry, SO. No ambiguity versed in this visceral ink. I agree w/Ms. Sikorski ... you are a master of mood enhanced poetry. Love and peace forever.

Kimberly Sikorski March 31, 2021 at 12:22 PM I love the somber mood of this piece ! The only color WE see ,....the rainbow. But for this soul, no light, no color, only darkness. Smiles ! Kim Sikorski

Niyna Desangre January 25, 2021 at 3:27 PM Never ask how a person got to be that way. Life will give you a living example of how things come to be. A precious heart covered in compressed despair. The only star she knows shines in your eyes so keep the light on for her.

Charmaine Chircop January 9, 2021 at 10:55 AM Sad when one is too desperate to see the reflection of the rainbow,to not be able to see that somebody cares.Heart-moving poem.Happy New Year S.O

Jennifer Proxenos December 16, 2020 at 7:49 AM Nice one Silent One - your emotions are evident as well as your usual talent. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Rekha Antony December 7, 2020 at 1:26 AM Deeply touched

Eve Roper December 6, 2020 at 8:15 PM Beautiful and very deep emotions. love it

Phyllis Babcock December 5, 2020 at 4:59 PM A nice contrast between the light and the dark in this wonderful poem. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2020 at 5:00 AM Such a sadness in her. Silent One December 5, 2020 at 9:46 AM Thank you..

Akkina Downing December 4, 2020 at 3:26 PM Sometimes the dark is the safest for others. They crash and burn with the light! Darkly beautiful little poem, twinny :) Silent One December 5, 2020 at 9:46 AM Thank you..

Heidi Sands December 3, 2020 at 5:38 PM So sad. People can get caught in darkness, either temporarily or long term. Well written Silent One ! :) Silent One December 5, 2020 at 9:46 AM Thank you..

Frederic Parker December 3, 2020 at 4:03 PM Darkness comes in many forms, none more frightening than when it comes from within Silent One December 5, 2020 at 9:46 AM Thank you..

Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 12:52 PM dark & melancholic. better to be a peasant in a joyous mood. Regards // paul Silent One December 5, 2020 at 9:46 AM Thank you..

Rama Balasubramanian December 3, 2020 at 2:52 AM Sometimes when humans are hurt beyond measure, damage is irreversible. So be good always. Nice message in a small write. Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:33 AM That is true and you cant save everyone.. Thank you

Brandy Nicole December 2, 2020 at 8:26 PM When darkness has settled in, it can be difficult for any light to shine through. Sad indeed. ~ Brandy Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:34 AM Very true and some succumb to the darkness, lost forever.. Thank you..

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 2, 2020 at 8:05 PM A lovely contrast of darkness and light. It's a Fave. Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:35 AM Thank you.. Glad you liked

FJ Thomas December 2, 2020 at 6:12 PM So beautifully dark... so beautiful Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:41 AM Thank you..

Angela Crabtree December 2, 2020 at 5:15 PM A wonderful write, Silent One. The last line says it all... Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:41 AM Thank you..

Sara Kendrick December 2, 2020 at 3:30 PM Sad and colorful in a dark way. Enjoyed reading your emotive work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:42 AM Thank you..

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2020 at 2:37 PM very sad and dark. But that aside, I really like this!!! Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:42 AM Thank you..

Ifeanyi Nwokeabia December 2, 2020 at 2:06 PM Truly a queen of darkness.she detests light. This is beautiful. Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:42 AM Thank you..

Beryl Edmonds December 2, 2020 at 1:10 PM Sad and beautiful at the same time, pain intricately woven through every line. Lovely Silent One... Belle Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:43 AM Thank you..

Paghunda Zahid December 2, 2020 at 10:13 AM Good one Silent One December 3, 2020 at 4:44 AM Thank you..

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