Queen

QUEEN Is it alright to inform you that life is a sweet victory? Is it alright to advise you to look at the world as such? I am just here to empower. Is it a prognosis that of nadirs? You are in the bottom of pits. To self-esteem from the lowest level, Is essence found through a depressive state. I know because I been to this country. The people in my surrounding meant not a thing. My depression desired surrender. I feel that yours is the same melancholy. Therefore, hoist is this verse. I commend you on how you are facing your demons to find a greater source. Is it okay to tell you that insight comes through life experiences? To know struggle and to know strife, both take a position in the fight. To apprise the spirit, you must have a defined path. Thorough is your journey centralized by understanding. Enlighten by the occurrences you confront, you are the strength to your home front. The prognosis of nadirs is things must become better. Your mental capacity states you know-how to express yourself. The glass ceiling is right above your head. Aspire for the inconceivable through the knowledge of what is incorrect. Life is not a bowl of cherries. Good things are said to come to those who wait. There is no need for procrastination. Life is there to create. Is it all right to motivate you? Is it all right to send inspiring words? Of course, you are to gain. As a woman, you reign. |_________________________| Penned on November 29, 2014!
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A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Verlena, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
Walker  Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 7:13 PM
Awesome, thanks for making it a favorite. Verlena
Mehta Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 5:40 AM
An uplifting verse composed well, Verlena, congrats on the win
Walker  Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram. Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Very inspiring write Verlena! I am sorry hvng missed to read u for quite sometime! Congrats on big win!
Walker  Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 11:28 PM
Thanks Upma for your congratulations. Verlena
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 2:48 PM
Wonderful choice for one of your favourites! So inspirational. Congratulations on your win.
Walker  Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Thanks Brenda for you awesome congratulations... Verlena
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:22 PM
An inspiring write Verlena - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Walker  Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Thanks Jan for your wonderful remarks and your congratulations... Verlena
A   Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 10:40 AM
a perfect 7 and fav
A   Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Verlena, Congratulations on your win. I'm finally making time to read every entry, intended for me in Shadow's Hamilton depression contest. It was a tough fight, however at the end I prayed, and asked to take over and he did. WOW, it was what I call a miracle. Thanks for lifting my day with this poem... Love LINDA
Walker  Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 6:09 PM
A recovery by faith is a miracle made PD. I wrote this poem with my knowledge of you as a Poet/Poetess. You have a great gift... Keep sharing your wows and hows and as you uplifted, others will share as well. Have a wonderful New Year! Verlena
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:15 PM
Quite inspiring verse, congrats on the win
Walker  Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram for your congratulations... Verlena
Haight Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Verlena, your poem is so inspirational with your touching care and advice, and so powerful and encouraging with your words of determination. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Walker  Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Thanks.,. verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Ur words u full of inspiration Verlena! Superb write n so is the win! Congrats !!
Walker  Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:58 AM
Thanks... Verlena ?
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:01 AM
congrats on win Verlena very inspirational poem hugs
Walker  Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Thanks... Verlena ??
A  Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 10:41 PM
I love this, very powerful. WOW! I just love it, a perfect 7, and a fav. ~SKAT~
Walker  Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Thanks Skat for your super-awesome response... Verlena
Meade Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 10:36 PM
If we rely only on experiences I hear Solomon: “Meaningless! Meaningless!” says the Teacher. “Utterly meaningless! Everything is meaningless.” What do people gain from all their labors at which they toil under the sun? Generations come and generations go, but the earth remains forever. We need each other the Spirit of Truth. I like your poem
Walker  Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Thanks David for your superlative commentary... Verlena
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