Queen

QUEEN Is it alright to inform you that life is a sweet victory? Is it alright to advise you to look at the world as such? I am just here to empower. Is it a prognosis that of nadirs? You are in the bottom of pits. To self-esteem from the lowest level, Is essence found through a depressive state. I know because I been to this country. The people in my surrounding meant not a thing. My depression desired surrender. I feel that yours is the same melancholy. Therefore, hoist is this verse. I commend you on how you are facing your demons to find a greater source. Is it okay to tell you that insight comes through life experiences? To know struggle and to know strife, both take a position in the fight. To apprise the spirit, you must have a defined path. Thorough is your journey centralized by understanding. Enlighten by the occurrences you confront, you are the strength to your home front. The prognosis of nadirs is things must become better. Your mental capacity states you know-how to express yourself. The glass ceiling is right above your head. Aspire for the inconceivable through the knowledge of what is incorrect. Life is not a bowl of cherries. Good things are said to come to those who wait. There is no need for procrastination. Life is there to create. Is it all right to motivate you? Is it all right to send inspiring words? Of course, you are to gain. As a woman, you reign. |_________________________| Penned on November 29, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/26/2015 5:58:00 PM
Verlena, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/27/2015 7:13:00 PM
Awesome, thanks for making it a favorite. Verlena
Date: 1/20/2015 5:40:00 AM
An uplifting verse composed well, Verlena, congrats on the win
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 1/20/2015 3:56:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram. Verlena
Date: 1/19/2015 11:15:00 PM
Very inspiring write Verlena! I am sorry hvng missed to read u for quite sometime! Congrats on big win!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 1/19/2015 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Upma for your congratulations. Verlena
Date: 1/19/2015 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful choice for one of your favourites! So inspirational. Congratulations on your win.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 1/19/2015 6:03:00 PM
Thanks Brenda for you awesome congratulations... Verlena
Date: 12/28/2014 8:22:00 PM
An inspiring write Verlena - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/29/2014 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your wonderful remarks and your congratulations... Verlena
Date: 12/27/2014 10:40:00 AM
Verlena, Congratulations on your win. I'm finally making time to read every entry, intended for me in Shadow's Hamilton depression contest. It was a tough fight, however at the end I prayed, and asked to take over and he did. WOW, it was what I call a miracle. Thanks for lifting my day with this poem... Love LINDA
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/29/2014 6:09:00 PM
A recovery by faith is a miracle made PD. I wrote this poem with my knowledge of you as a Poet/Poetess. You have a great gift... Keep sharing your wows and hows and as you uplifted, others will share as well. Have a wonderful New Year! Verlena
Date: 12/27/2014 10:40:00 AM
a perfect 7 and fav
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:15:00 PM
Quite inspiring verse, congrats on the win
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/9/2014 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram for your congratulations... Verlena
Date: 12/9/2014 9:28:00 AM
Verlena, your poem is so inspirational with your touching care and advice, and so powerful and encouraging with your words of determination. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/9/2014 9:57:00 AM
Thanks.,. verlena
Date: 12/9/2014 8:03:00 AM
Ur words u full of inspiration Verlena! Superb write n so is the win! Congrats !!
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Date: 12/9/2014 9:58:00 AM
Thanks... Verlena ?
Date: 12/9/2014 8:01:00 AM
congrats on win Verlena very inspirational poem hugs
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Date: 12/9/2014 9:59:00 AM
Thanks... Verlena ??
Date: 11/29/2014 10:41:00 PM
I love this, very powerful. WOW! I just love it, a perfect 7, and a fav. ~SKAT~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/29/2014 11:21:00 PM
Thanks Skat for your super-awesome response... Verlena
Date: 11/29/2014 10:36:00 PM
If we rely only on experiences I hear Solomon: “Meaningless! Meaningless!” says the Teacher. “Utterly meaningless! Everything is meaningless.” What do people gain from all their labors at which they toil under the sun? Generations come and generations go, but the earth remains forever. We need each other the Spirit of Truth. I like your poem
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:22:00 PM
Thanks David for your superlative commentary... Verlena
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