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Que Hablo

Que hablo Diablo? I missed that metaphor; All the smoke and mirrors, crazy like Dead Man’s Curve; Head on crash, it figures; Que hablo Diablo? Your tongue sounds so foreign; It’s way too seductive, listeners lose control; Is chaos the motive? Que hablo Diablo? Why’d you break your silence? Is it my fire you want? That righteous part of me described as termagant? Que hablo Diablo? You’ll never be granted the key to full access; I have an armored shield built of poet’s madness.

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Date: 5/28/2024 8:59:00 AM
Dear Melani, What a fierce and captivating exploration of language and power. The imagery you create with your words is striking, drawing me, the reader, into a world of mystery and intrigue. I love how you play with the idea of seduction and chaos, weaving a tale that keeps us on the edge of our seats. Keep enchanting us with your poetic prowess! - Blessings, Daniel
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 5/28/2024 11:42:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate the kind words. Blessings.

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