Quavering From Her Touch

Softly she did touch my heart. It was as gentle as 

a feather falling to earth. I had never 

been touch like that before, her hands were 

as soft as a new born babies skin. She spoke 

like a echo that could haunt you for days on in... 

Softly she did come my way, quickly she did 

walk away. Just the thought of her touch on my 

skin makes me quaver and tremble all over again. 

Quickly I did awaken from my dream, I tried to 

catch her, but she just seem to fade away... 

She seem to have left me all by myself? 

Then I did awaken to realize...As they 

pull my car from the river, were I had just tried 

to kill myself...it was then that I knew? I 

had been touch by an angel and that she only 

came to save me life. Left quavering but still

alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/19/2010 3:07:00 PM
I like the story line and the ironical twist in the end. The piece flows very well and has a story to tell. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jay. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:08:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 11:04:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece tribute to a lovely lady!!!, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:27:00 PM
Congrats Jay on being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:50:00 PM
The ending caught me by surprise and a nice surprise too. Thanks for sharing this story. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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