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Quavering From Her Touch

Softly she did touch my heart. It was as gentle as a feather falling to earth. I had never been touch like that before, her hands were as soft as a new born babies skin. She spoke like a echo that could haunt you for days on in... Softly she did come my way, quickly she did walk away. Just the thought of her touch on my skin makes me quaver and tremble all over again. Quickly I did awaken from my dream, I tried to catch her, but she just seem to fade away... She seem to have left me all by myself? Then I did awaken to realize...As they pull my car from the river, were I had just tried to kill myself...it was then that I knew? I had been touch by an angel and that she only came to save me life. Left quavering but still alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/19/2010 3:07:00 PM
I like the story line and the ironical twist in the end. The piece flows very well and has a story to tell. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jay. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:08:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 11:04:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece tribute to a lovely lady!!!, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:27:00 PM
Congrats Jay on being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:50:00 PM
The ending caught me by surprise and a nice surprise too. Thanks for sharing this story. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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