Quatrain-Sequence

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a one-sided love affair
ends in despair..
A testament of promise-
of faith..so little trace

An offer to all
to turn back,the call..
A testament of life-
by a sacrifice..of grace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 10:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this today Brian. So wonderful to see you here posting. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Lovely Brian..How are you? BG
Goff Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:05 PM
often, the journey is a solitary experience, with grace, a self revelation, well done! Brian! jimbo
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 4:58 PM
I once was down in Lodebar but Grace took me in..Enjoyed reading your work..Remember me on the sixteenth ...I am to have spinal surgery..Third/ fourth lumbar decompression with the removal of a cyst..Sara
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