Quatrain

I’m selfish, greedy, heartless... lost?
I can’t make up my mind.
I’m torn between the man I want,
And the one I’d leave behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Hmmm... a quandary. You wrote 'I'd leave' and not 'I left,' so it's even more of a quandary! Good luck!! Keith :)
Austin Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Food for thought. There probably aint no such animal, but the search don't make ya selfish and greedy. This is clever. I like it mucho. Congrats on the selection. Dave
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Many women are faced with this dilema in their lifetime..Great emotion in this one..Congratulations on being featured this week..Sara
Brown Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Annie. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Torn would make a good title! Welcome to the soup! Light & Love
Chappell Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 4:24 PM
wow im torn in every way my friend for a lady i loved ripped me apart and to this day i don't know why thank you for sharing your write
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