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I’m selfish, greedy, heartless... lost? I can’t make up my mind. I’m torn between the man I want, And the one I’d leave behind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/13/2012 7:02:00 PM
Hmmm... a quandary. You wrote 'I'd leave' and not 'I left,' so it's even more of a quandary! Good luck!! Keith :)
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Date: 1/4/2011 10:54:00 AM
Food for thought. There probably aint no such animal, but the search don't make ya selfish and greedy. This is clever. I like it mucho. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 1/3/2011 6:59:00 AM
Many women are faced with this dilema in their lifetime..Great emotion in this one..Congratulations on being featured this week..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Annie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2010 11:37:00 AM
Torn would make a good title! Welcome to the soup! Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:24:00 PM
wow im torn in every way my friend for a lady i loved ripped me apart and to this day i don't know why thank you for sharing your write
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