Gershon Wolf Poet Alliteration

Quarterly Report - 2020

The world is waiting
  waiting and watching
watching and wincing
  wincing and wounded

The world is weakening
  weakening and wilting
wilting and waning
  waning and withered

The world is whimpering
  whimpering and weeping
weeping and waylaid
  waylaid and whipsawed

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Jenish Somadas April 7, 2020 at 9:02 AM In that world, I searched for a 'W'.. All are taken.. Wonderful wise words.. Gershon Wolf April 7, 2020 at 4:37 PM Well... ~ Wolf

Sandra Adams April 6, 2020 at 7:39 PM wonderfully written worrisome warrior... fun aside, loved this my friend... it flows beautifully and speaks volumes... hugs and blessings Gershon Wolf April 6, 2020 at 9:29 PM Cute, clever comment! Thanks! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues April 6, 2020 at 7:31 PM Love that last line! Gershon Wolf April 6, 2020 at 9:28 PM Had to crack the whip sooner or later! :) gw

Kevin Shaw April 6, 2020 at 3:32 PM Good one Gershon, nice to see the word "Whipsawed" used for probably the first time ever in verse, regards, Kevin Gershon Wolf April 6, 2020 at 4:08 PM Wonderful what a wild website can do, eh?! Smiles, gw

Ilene Bauer April 6, 2020 at 1:43 PM you wowed me in this one, gershon! wonderful! Gershon Wolf April 6, 2020 at 4:06 PM Whew! Whoa! Whee! ~ Gershon

Sam Kauffman April 6, 2020 at 1:22 PM Whew! What, when, where and why in whimpering, waiting, wounded and whipsawed! WOW! Wonderful winsome writing! Gershon Wolf April 6, 2020 at 4:06 PM Sam, your silky-smooth, serene, soul-soothing syllables send sapiens soaring! ~ Crazy Commenter

P.S. Awtry April 6, 2020 at 9:16 AM Yes, tis true. Well done :) Gershon Wolf April 6, 2020 at 10:44 AM Do you think that this report will pass the auditors' financial muster?! LOL. Thanks, P.S!