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Quarter Sized Foe

Looming Doom Horrendous Horror Coming for me Chasing after me I take one step It takes eight I cannot out run it I must fight Fight this suffocating fear With an Iron Will I turn and face my opponent And with a courage of the ages I bring swiftly down bristled justice upon this monstrous abomination A squelch peals the air as I deal injury to my foe But alas my enemy is strong and loss of limb shan’t stop him New tactics must be taken I wield my weapon of wood and straw and scream ‘MOMMMMMY QUICK BEFORE IT GETS AWAY’ And with but a noble shoe my adversary was dead Everything Halloween, 9/30/13

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2013 10:34:00 AM

Shawnee, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

Skat A

Date: 10/27/2013 1:15:00 AM

Shawnee, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

Skat A

Date: 10/1/2013 7:05:00 PM

Shawnee, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2013 2:49:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Shawnee ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2013 7:05:00 PM

Shawnee, ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 9/30/2013 6:23:00 PM

† Smile, You Made Me Laugh Aloud With This Hilarious Yet Profound Verse, Sweet Beautiful Shawnee ˜ Tis Somewhat Crazy In That I Myself Wouldn't Wish To Kill Even A Cockroach Yet, I Guess When Their Swimming Through Your Brew Siphoning Joyful's Hops As Barley Then, They Won't Feel A Thing ? Ooops, Keep Making Her Poe Smile, Love, John