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Writing Challenge - Q words - Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 08/01/2023 (Double Tricube)

on the prowl,
           a big cat;
       hunger pangs.

        oh, the thrill 
         of the hunt!
           unaware... 

         sitting duck 
           of a prey,
           selected...

          from afar, 
       sneaking up;
 creep, creep, creep. 

          stealthily,
      leopard stalks.
             quietly 

          lies in wait; 
         pounces on 
              impala.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/7/2023 11:45:00 AM

In a manner reminiscent of a leopard's calculated pursuit of an impala, you skillfully capture the exquisite precision and grace of his actions. Hearty Congrats on your remarkable win. May I inquire as to your forthcoming contest?

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/8/2023 10:44:00 AM

Thank you so much for the congratulations and visit, Lasaad;-) My new contest is already up, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2023 8:21:00 AM

In nature I know it is fight for survival but it is always sad when one animal is killed so the other ones can live.Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/8/2023 10:49:00 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful visit and comments, Sara:-)

Valsa George

Date: 8/4/2023 6:46:00 AM

This is exactly the way a leopard preys on an impala ! Its movements are so beautifully and meticulously caught ! Congratulations Edward on your great win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/4/2023 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Valsa:-)