Quantum Wave Extended

In your mind
I see a passing 
Wave –

On a 
different frequency
to mine –

If only you and I
could surf the same

On silky waters
Crest and trough in
Time –

The resonance that 
Vibrates for us both

Is oh so tantalizing and
so close –

If only we could make
a quantum shift

And let uncertain 
Hearts together
drift!




In my mind
I see what I can 
Save-

A Quantum
of our senses
caught in time-

If you and I
in moments
could remain

Potential seeking
souls that shrill
sublime-

Reverberate and strike
a perfect note

Resounding in this
Universe of both-

With Energies of will that 
 quantum sift

Through certainties
in hearts a cherished 
gift




In other worlds
I see how we
Behave-

Two particles
in congress
so divine-

If only you and I
begin to crave

And dance in unison
while in our prime-

If reason for each other
we betroth 

Two shifting Quantum
hearts that we behold-

A Universe resounding 
with our song

A Universe in 
which we both
belong !




In our minds
I see a passing 
Wave –

On a 
frequency
that is sublime –

And you and I
can only 
surf the same

On silky waters
Crest and trough in
Time –

The resonance that 
Vibrates for us both

Is oh so tantalizing and
so close –

And only we can make
this quantum shift

And let our certain 
Hearts together
drift!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/4/2012 9:13:00 AM
My husband is a Physics major... He loved this as much as I did... Your writtings are very unique and interesting... This is my favorite.
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David Byrne
Date: 2/4/2012 9:38:00 PM
I love physics especially the theoretical stuff : )
Date: 2/1/2012 6:16:00 AM
Wery well done David. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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