Yoni Dvorkis Poet Shape

Quantum Differential

I                    Am                    In



         All || Places At || Once



And                 I                     Make



       No || Attempt To || Hide



Particle will wave goodbye
As it flees the naked eye
Dubious in my resolve
Determination gone awry


I                    Am                    Not                    


                  
                  Certain



Yet                  I                      Feel
 

                    
                    Sure

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Sara Kendrick October 2, 2009 at 12:53 PM Interesting thoughts put to pen. Time consuming on the shape. Good work. Keep writing. Sara

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 19, 2009 at 3:20 PM Dear Yoni, I have several shape POEMS but YOURS pulls the reader into the core of the POEM Marvelous Write When YOU read my POEM "The Mirage You see is POETRY" start with the first Capitalized word in the first set of Haiku the first capital is in the second Haiku "POETS' also YOU can read each line straight across Ex. "My inspiration, My only Beloved, my most Dearest Wife bringing Memories Yesteryear POETS 9 -5 9 -7 9 -5 syllable count LOVE ALWAYS...YOUR LIEGE...HG

Keith Bickerstaffe January 9, 2009 at 6:47 AM Excellent layout... one's attention is grabbed immediately. Super piece Yoni! Best wishes, Keith

Kristin Reynolds January 9, 2009 at 3:21 AM I hear this write. :) only the one true I is certain and true - all others are one way or another. well said, love, Kristin