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Quantum Differential

I Am In All || Places At || Once And I Make No || Attempt To || Hide Particle will wave goodbye As it flees the naked eye Dubious in my resolve Determination gone awry I Am Not Certain Yet I Feel Sure

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2009 12:53:00 PM

Interesting thoughts put to pen. Time consuming on the shape. Good work. Keep writing. Sara

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/19/2009 3:20:00 PM

Dear Yoni, I have several shape POEMS but YOURS pulls the reader into the core of the POEM Marvelous Write When YOU read my POEM "The Mirage You see is POETRY" start with the first Capitalized word in the first set of Haiku the first capital is in the second Haiku "POETS' also YOU can read each line straight across Ex. "My inspiration, My only Beloved, my most Dearest Wife bringing Memories Yesteryear POETS 9 -5 9 -7 9 -5 syllable count LOVE ALWAYS...YOUR LIEGE...HG

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/9/2009 6:47:00 AM

Excellent layout... one's attention is grabbed immediately. Super piece Yoni! Best wishes, Keith

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/9/2009 3:21:00 AM

I hear this write. :) only the one true I is certain and true - all others are one way or another. well said, love, Kristin