Quantum Challenged FINAL
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Poetic Form: Imagism
Inspired: 2024 September 01
Image: N/A
"Referencing an old poetic imagism sort of poem I wrote some four years ago--almost to the day---wherein lies a paradox," ... by The Poet.
MIRROR, MIRROR
I was in a room,
there, I saw a mirror,
and then I saw him,
I told him to get out,
and he did,
and he took the mirror,
and I was no more.
--The End--
I'm unlike some writers who find the trash bin handy.
I backspace, or I extract the intended, that is, Mirror, Mirror, cut-n-paste, leaving in its wake, helter-skelter.
Other writers toss their helters, better known as frustrations.
I keep mine, clueless as to what hornet nest or lotto numbers, whereto, I don't play.
There was an online newspaper story just after I posted Part VI.
'Twas too late for an inclusive entry, and I felt that I'd be privy to the marred and shame attributed to the news media in whatever be its venue, re: sensationalism.
Howbeit, not for its uproar it bears mentioning similarities that, Mirror loop of four with Isle gone vs the newbie loop of 800 years nigh U.S. cities of their sleeping volcanoes--our volcano not active on top, but below--constantly Hellish.
As I said, the intervening factor is probably just that.
I'm back home now, staff said there was a passing tropical storm, a couple of days ago, that's it.
The upcoming cash contest should be out by Tuesday the 3rd. Hopefully, the next cash contest will start on the same day.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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