Quake

Mother Earth shivers violently, quakes;
Her fracked core splits apart and
She weeps for her children.

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Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2018 at 3:58 PM

a good personification, M

M. L. Kiser

October 16, 2018 at 1:48 PM

Oh, thank you; I'm glad you liked it.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

October 15, 2018 at 1:03 PM

Earthquakes I learnt are caused at times by mans ways I read Sth like that so how u portray that is with feeling and poetic expression wow. Says a lot in brevity. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.

M. L. Kiser

October 15, 2018 at 2:25 PM

Thanks so much and I will.

Gershon Wolf

October 15, 2018 at 11:34 AM

Haunting, and unfortunately true. Memorably imaged, M.L. Kudos. ~ gw

M. L. Kiser

October 15, 2018 at 12:18 PM

Oh good, thanks.

Mike Gentile

October 15, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Yes M.L. We are destroying our home . This one is indeed timely and powerful!!!

M. L. Kiser

October 15, 2018 at 12:19 PM

Yes, I hate it that it's being destroyed by our greed. Sometimes I with the Industrial Revolution had never happened. I think there are other ways to do things without destruction and people should try to imagine the consequences of what they're planning to create and do beforehand. Thanks so much, Mike.