Quake

Mother Earth shivers violently, quakes; Her fracked core splits apart and She weeps for her children.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2018 3:58:00 PM

a good personification, M

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/16/2018 1:48:00 PM

Oh, thank you; I'm glad you liked it.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/15/2018 1:03:00 PM

Earthquakes I learnt are caused at times by mans ways I read Sth like that so how u portray that is with feeling and poetic expression wow. Says a lot in brevity. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 2:25:00 PM

Thanks so much and I will.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2018 11:34:00 AM

Haunting, and unfortunately true. Memorably imaged, M.L. Kudos. ~ gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 12:18:00 PM

Oh good, thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/15/2018 11:25:00 AM

Yes M.L. We are destroying our home . This one is indeed timely and powerful!!!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 12:19:00 PM

Yes, I hate it that it's being destroyed by our greed. Sometimes I with the Industrial Revolution had never happened. I think there are other ways to do things without destruction and people should try to imagine the consequences of what they're planning to create and do beforehand. Thanks so much, Mike.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/15/2018 9:20:00 AM

Very emotive! A strong one! Very expressive!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim; I'm glad you felt like that. I meant it to be that way.