Rob Carmack Poet Verse

Quadro - Western Stars

Denied western stars.
Memories open windows, but
it is up to you
if golden rays leave smiles or scars.

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Date: 01.12.17
Contest: Quadro
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2017 at 3:37 PM Coming back to this excellent verse to say HELLO, Rob. I hope you are having a great day.

Doug Vinson March 7, 2017 at 11:47 PM The power of the moment. The power of the other person. Such power, Rob. : )

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2017 at 3:49 PM ok, waiting for more poems again!!

Maurice Yvonne January 31, 2017 at 9:06 AM So much in such few lines. Really fine writing.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 17, 2017 at 7:13 PM Very nice. Congratulations on your win with this fine Quadro. Hugs, Dane Ann Rob Carmack January 18, 2017 at 2:27 AM Thank you for reading and commenting Dane Ann .. Hugs.

Charlie Smith January 17, 2017 at 12:56 PM So very well done, congratulations Rob... Rob Carmack January 18, 2017 at 2:26 AM Thank you Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2017 at 3:35 PM wow, Rob, this is impressive work in this little poem. I am so glad you found your muse in this challenge of Nette's! Congras for your win. The message is beautifully portrayed. Rob Carmack January 15, 2017 at 11:05 PM Thank You Andrea.

Janis Medders Tobechi January 15, 2017 at 1:38 PM It is strange. Some people saw sunrise some saw sunset. I wonder if there was something to that. I saw sunset as you did. Congratulations. Rob Carmack January 15, 2017 at 11:05 PM I think there is something to that. Thanks Janis.

Mark Martin January 15, 2017 at 1:09 PM Also denied the sunset. Unique idea - like it! Congrats Rob! :-) Rob Carmack January 15, 2017 at 11:05 PM Thanks Mark.

Paul Callus January 15, 2017 at 12:08 PM I like this unique take of yours, Rob. You probe suggestively, but leave it to us to make the final decision! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul Rob Carmack January 15, 2017 at 11:05 PM Thank you Paul.

Nette Onclaud January 15, 2017 at 11:43 AM rob, i was taken by how you interpreted the theme; well delivered... sweet congrats on your win and thanks for participating!..huggs Rob Carmack January 15, 2017 at 11:04 PM Thank you Nette. Hugs squared.

Agnes Krampe January 15, 2017 at 11:25 AM Awesome. Love the last line. Congrats on your win, Rob. Agnes Rob Carmack January 15, 2017 at 11:04 PM TY Agnes.