Quadro Morning

Morning's peaceful rise
subdues low hanging clouds of gray
burning soft from view
a warm splayed light is night's demise

1/12/17
contest Quadro
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Very nice. Congratulations on your win with this fine Quadro. Hugs, Dane Ann
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 12:58 PM
Lovely work Frederic, congratulations...
Carmack Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 10:48 PM
Congrats Frederic.
Nusker Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 9:45 PM
So beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 3:29 PM
I loved it the first time I saw it. Congrats on your well deserved win!
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
Martin Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Great sunrise poetry Frederic! Congrats on your win! :-)
Callus Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 12:00 PM
A beautiful take on the supplied picture, Frederic. Much enjoyed. Congratulations on placing so high. Regards // paul
Turner Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Impressive, Frederic. Congratulations on your fine placement:)
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 11:35 AM
the elegance of this piece is quite outstanding, frederick; love the last line!... fine congrats and your high slot and thanks for participating.. huggs
Krampe Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Beautiful, Frederick. Congrats on your win. Agnes
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 7:10 PM
wow, another final line that blows me away!! By the way, I took the picture to be dawn too, but I am noticing a few thought it was dusk. Wish there was a way to know for sure!!!
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Such beautiful descriptive imagery Frederic :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Michelle Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 12:59 PM
The last line is wonderfully penned! A seriously wonderful write! Love, Juli-Michelle
Hamilton Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Just wonderful writing Frederick, this should do well!
Smith Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 12:08 PM
Beautifully written with such delicate ink my friend.. Best of luck in the contest.. Arlene
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