Quadro- Free and Fair

The open windows
embrace the gleams of the sunrise
as the sunset beams,
like open hearts where free wind blows.



~01/12/17
~Quadro contest by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 3:51 PM
ths is really well written and sounds utterly beautiful, Abduil. One of my favorites. Congrats.
Mandani Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 4:55 PM
Thanks Andrea, appreciate your comment very much.
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 3:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 12:21 PM
abdul, your gem of a piece shines but doesn't go over the top... i would have ranked this higher if only there were less fillers... nonetheless, greeat job... best congrats and thanks for being here... huggs
Allison Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 4:46 PM
Such beautiful imagery Abdul good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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