Quadrilateral Wall Violence

in the shape of maintenance 
there are four straight sided sides
lies of coper (copper) pipes 
to actually but not officially 
or explicitly choke the life 
out of me 
pigmented mutuality  
is credibility yours to kill 
come find me nosy enigmatic organization
(groups who solve puzzles)
while my grave is being dug 
clues to the find 
are not all in the same state 
rotting candor of honesty
i did lyric (write) and stopped breathing  

shape of maintenance 
four straight sides
of copper pipes 
actually but not officially 
choke the life 
out of me 
mutuality  
credibility to kill 
come nosy youthful institution of association
my grave is being dug 
clues to the find  
look states 
fumy honesty
lyric and not breathing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/28/2017 3:20:00 AM
This is awesome writing. I cannot say I fully understand it, so I will not make assumptions, I do see the metaphor, the sadness and the life being squeezed away....
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Date: 5/28/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thank you - you are right, about the poem -
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