Qristalynn Queen [featured 3/9/09]

Unabashedly he looks at her,
He knows her truth, yet doesn’t utter.
She hides in glass and forms a shell,
He sees her heart, but can’t define it.

Ashamedly she ponders his eyes,
Such beauty in their witnessings.
He barely notices her stare,
Until it bores right through him.

He takes a peek, and sees a skull,
Hovering where her head should lie.
Is it a vision, or is it the truth,
He doesn’t know and can’t divine it.

Wheeled upon a golden carriage,
She is encased in glass but thrice.
He sees the faults within the shields,
He can but doesn’t free her life.

A harmonious tune of sanctity,
Deliciously coated with her poison.
Does it sting when you bite it,
Yes, but he can’t decline it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 12, 2009 at 11:51 PM
Congratulations on this lovely piece being featured this week..GB Tyesha
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March 12, 2009 at 4:59 AM
gratz on the feature of the week ~Ashley
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March 12, 2009 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations on this excellent poem being featured this week. Peace Fathima
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March 11, 2009 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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March 11, 2009 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congrats Sait Alphonse on your poem being featured the week of 3/9/09. God Bless. Vince
Mason Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 3:59 PM
Have you ever seen the crystal skulls they found buried by the Mayans? The imagery of your writing brought them to mind ... anyway excellent work here and a well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations to you.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:41 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen
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March 9, 2009 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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March 9, 2009 at 6:20 AM
Very unique write, captivating! Congrats on your feature this week. :) Amy
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March 9, 2009 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 8, 2009 at 10:06 PM
Saint - Interesting tale - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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