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Qristalynn Queen [featured 3/9/09]

Unabashedly he looks at her, He knows her truth, yet doesn’t utter. She hides in glass and forms a shell, He sees her heart, but can’t define it. Ashamedly she ponders his eyes, Such beauty in their witnessings. He barely notices her stare, Until it bores right through him. He takes a peek, and sees a skull, Hovering where her head should lie. Is it a vision, or is it the truth, He doesn’t know and can’t divine it. Wheeled upon a golden carriage, She is encased in glass but thrice. He sees the faults within the shields, He can but doesn’t free her life. A harmonious tune of sanctity, Deliciously coated with her poison. Does it sting when you bite it, Yes, but he can’t decline it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/12/2009 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations on this lovely piece being featured this week..GB Tyesha
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Date: 3/12/2009 4:59:00 AM
gratz on the feature of the week ~Ashley
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Date: 3/12/2009 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on this excellent poem being featured this week. Peace Fathima
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/11/2009 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:10:00 AM
Congrats Sait Alphonse on your poem being featured the week of 3/9/09. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 3:59:00 PM
Have you ever seen the crystal skulls they found buried by the Mayans? The imagery of your writing brought them to mind ... anyway excellent work here and a well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:41:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen
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Date: 3/9/2009 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:20:00 AM
Very unique write, captivating! Congrats on your feature this week. :) Amy
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 10:06:00 PM
Saint - Interesting tale - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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