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The python hung down from the tree, It hissed and it scared little me, I gave it a whack, To make it turn back, And have someone else for its tea. For Russell’s Five Minute Challenge, 11th May

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Date: 8/22/2013 6:44:00 PM
wacky is the word for this! i really like what you write amazing,refreshing. . . your fan
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Date: 5/18/2013 9:02:00 PM
Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA
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Date: 5/15/2013 11:18:00 AM
A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT
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Date: 5/12/2013 12:06:00 AM
GREAT job, I see great minds think alike. I chose limerick form too. Something about doing a limerick. You just feel more confident to do something fast in that form!!
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:47:00 PM
You always make me laugh with your Limericks, Jack. Always fun to read! I'm doing much better... x Always, Annalise
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:29:00 PM
Jack, thank you for the nice little hi... hope you are well... Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Date: 5/11/2013 8:28:00 PM
Good luck in the contest....sounds like a winner to me...
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Date: 5/11/2013 6:22:00 PM
nice one! i enjoyed it!
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Date: 5/11/2013 3:30:00 PM
I loved it Jack!... I t made me laugh..I loved the lightheartedness... Love Diana
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Date: 5/11/2013 2:33:00 PM
lol. You did well in your limited time, Jack. Good luck in the contest. :-)
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