Pyramids of Love

This is beautifully descriptive. I can imagine the words speak to Cleopatra or some other special person of today. I am not one who believes in heaven or anything after death, but if I did I would hope it would be as you say it is. The destined twin flames ascending reminds me of the lights for the twin towers. There's an eerie similarity. The word combinations are remarkable and I am in awe of the spectacular quality you create. The star patterns are as you indicate what we imagine they are.

Ahhhh!! Very descriptive lines penned. Sara K

Bringing to life one the wonders of the world in a flowing rhythm. Congratulations on your top placement in the contest. Wishing you a nice day from Krish.

You bring the enormity and sheer wonder of the great pyramids to life with magic phrases such as "pyramids embalmed in juniper, incensing golden dreams." Well done Empress. Best wishes from Wen

Impressive, as Lasaad says! … unveiled pyramids embalmed in juniper…and more! Congratulations, Ink Empress!

Impressive beginning, dear friend Ink, using a wonderful vocabulary: I recall the imagery of Cleopatra's era, with time revealing pyramids infused with juniper, evoking vivid dreams. The stars decorating the skies with hieroglyphics are truly magnificent, stunningly penned as usual.

Oh, you won something with this?1 Congrats!

- Imagine experiencing the sunrise Sahara ... what a dream ... lovely poem, Ink :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day.............

Lovely imagery, Inky. A good entry for the contest, if you are entering this one. Good luck, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

beautiful and touching, i know a cleopatra in a sport team of my hometown, would like to see pyramids i guess, thanks for the beautiful poem, dear poet

So nicely written about pyramids. Most people did seasons. You took a more difficult theme. Congrats on your win

I like the word play in this lovely write Empress, Congrats on your win

This is lovely- a kind dedication.

The ultimate love story. Wouldn't that be a great time in history to pop back to. I wonder how many lovers are buried together for eternity. Actually, the pyramids are on my bucket list.

Great poem. The moon embellishes and the triangles will always be famous.

Awesome opening, my friend, in fabulous vocabulary: I remember Cleopatra's moon, as triangles of time unveiled pyramids embalmed in juniper, incensing golden dreams---when cylinders of stars embellish skies with hieroglyphics--superb as always, Ink. Another FAVE!

Like a song, brilliant. Love this and you, God bless you - love, Gina

remember Cleopatra's moon,Oooooo unveiled pyramids embalmed in juniper, incensing golden dreams.., mmmm look at ur sexy words n how they flow like a breeze.. engraved your initials with pearls and diamonds.mmmm damn papi!!! How romantic!!! lunar silence when cylinders of stars.. the dreaminess u bring!!! attain heaven beneath henna herbs of love... that’s ending is just magnificent!!! Beautiful weave papi

My gosh, what a magnificent poem this is! I'm blown away by the royal, elegant and ancient era that has been painted in front of my eyes with your enchanting wordplay.. It's like you've created a love story of the medieval times! I absolutely adore "Cleopatra's moon", "sunrise Sahara,I've engraved your initials with pearls and diamonds" Oh my, immensely gorgeous and artistically mesmerizing "lunar silence","You’ll remain a musical~maestro","henna herbs of love" Love that ending so much, magical.. As well as how you've crafted emotions using metaphors and alliteration so effortlessly, ah, that's amazing.. Your lines are flowing impeccably. Enjoyed reading this, as always, best wishes for the contest, this should do very well. Sending love & light :)

You will remain a musical . Wow . Beautiful

Once again, a beautiful poem. Liked the historic tones and ancient aura that it imparts.