Pyramids

This is not the first of our great steps.
   It begins in an alcoholic stupor
      Someone carves in stone -
        "Khufu must be drunk."
                 Just so,
                Red-eyed
          Up here, a hot
        Sun rising glues sand
     To burning skin with sweat.
Another stone is raised - a head drops,
   Dwelling on it. Complicated is not
           Chiseled here alongside
             The river;we breed,
                  We stink,
                 We vanish
             Into the sand like
           Dung-beetles This is
  The Old Kingdom and what is seen
As new is tomorrow's murderous sun.
   We have more runes to carve.
         We have grave issues 
             With an afterlife,
                    Period.




                               
                               Notes:
                               Khufu: King and builder of The Great Pyramid.
                               The Old Kingdom: The time of pyramid building.
                                                          2700 - 2100 BC.
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March 29, 2014 at 4:37 PM
David,, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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March 22, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, david
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March 22, 2014 at 9:39 PM
Nice history, concept, layout of form and flow in this creative poem, David
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March 22, 2014 at 7:41 PM
David, congratulations on your win... Enjoyed the reading... Verlena
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January 31, 2014 at 1:05 PM
- David, an interesting topic, well written in a unique way - Like your shape poem - Have a pleasant weekend, relax!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 31, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Thanks. Youn have a good weekend too.
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