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To whom shall I say my last goodbye? To the shining sun or to the shady sky ** To whom shall I say my last goodbye? To the lost happiness or to the last cry ** To whom shall I say my last goodbye? To the tough person or to the tearful eye ** To whom shall I say my last goodbye? To the former failure or to the first try ** To whom shall I say my last goodbye? To the right answer or to the wrong reply ** To whom shall I say my last goodbye? To the unstoppable what, when, how or why *** Blackmatta

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Date: 9/24/2015 5:21:00 PM
A very heart based poem, my last goodbye will be to me. Well done Blackmatta
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Date: 8/14/2015 9:44:00 AM
Very very nice Black. I like it. I think we might have some common something... feel it but can't find the word.
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Black Matta
Date: 8/14/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thank you, Howard... since we are supposed to be poets or "soupers" then we have lots of common things :) haha.
Date: 3/25/2015 9:10:00 AM
Blackmatta, I love this line, to whom shall I say my last goodbye? for in reality most people die alone ( I work in health care so I know this to be true ) a perfect 7 rating for me with this deep poem and thanks for visiting my poem, death whispers . . .
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:37:00 PM
Oh, this is sad to know! Thank you for reading my poem :)

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